Sample Comment Letter 1 – Basic Template

[Your Name]
[Address]
[City, State, ZIP]
[Email Address]
[Date]

To: [Agency Name]
Re: Public Comment on [Permit/Application Number or Project Name]

Dear [Agency Contact Name or “To Whom It May Concern”],

I am submitting comments regarding the [permit/application/project name] proposed by [company name]. I am concerned about the potential impacts of this project on my community, including:

  • [Example: water quality in nearby streams and wells]
  • [Example: air pollution and public health]
  • [Example: subsidence or damage to local infrastructure]

I respectfully request that the agency:

  1. Ensure that all proposed mitigation measures are fully implemented and monitored.
  2. Require additional measures to protect local water and air quality.
  3. Take into account the cumulative impacts of coal mining in this region.

Thank you for considering my comments. I urge the agency to prioritize public health and environmental protection in reviewing this project.

Sincerely,
[Your Name]


Sample Comment Letter 2 – Personal Impact Approach

[Your Name]
[Address]
[City, State, ZIP]
[Email Address]
[Date]

To: [Agency Name]
Re: Public Comment on [Permit/Application Number or Project Name]

Dear [Agency Contact Name],

I live in [town/county], which is within the area that may be affected by the proposed [project/permit]. I am concerned that this project could negatively impact my community’s health, safety, and quality of life.

Specifically, I am worried about:

  • Water contamination: Local streams and wells could be affected by runoff from mining operations. My household relies on [source of water] for drinking, bathing, and irrigation.
  • Subsidence and property damage: Longwall mining could damage nearby homes, roads, and local infrastructure.
  • Air quality and health: Dust and emissions could increase respiratory problems, particularly for children and older adults in our community.

I urge the agency to:

  • Carefully review the permit with attention to these risks.
  • Require the company to implement strict monitoring and mitigation measures.
  • Engage the community throughout the process to ensure concerns are addressed.

Thank you for considering my input. I appreciate the agency’s efforts to involve the public in decisions that affect our communities.

Sincerely,
[Your Name]


Sample Comment Letter 3 – Technical/Policy-Focused Approach

[Your Name or Organization]
[Address]
[City, State, ZIP]
[Email Address]
[Date]

To: [Agency Name]
Re: Public Comment on [Permit/Application Number or Project Name]

Dear [Agency Contact Name],

I am submitting this comment regarding the proposed [project/permit] by [company name]. My concern is that the project may not fully comply with the Surface Mining Control and Reclamation Act (SMCRA) and other state or federal environmental regulations.

Key Issues:

  1. Subsidence and hydrological impacts: Longwall mining has the potential to cause ground subsidence, lowering the water table and disrupting streams and springs. The permit application lacks adequate mitigation measures for these impacts.
  2. Cumulative environmental effects: The permit does not fully account for the cumulative impacts of nearby mining operations, which could exacerbate risks to water quality, air quality, and ecosystems.
  3. Community engagement: The public notice period is short, and outreach to impacted residents has been insufficient. A meaningful public comment process is necessary for transparency and accountability.

Requested Actions:

  • Require a detailed plan to monitor and mitigate subsidence and hydrological impacts.
  • Evaluate cumulative environmental impacts across the region.
  • Extend public comment opportunities and hold additional hearings accessible to affected communities.

Thank you for your consideration. Ensuring compliance with SMCRA and protecting public health and the environment is critical. I urge the agency to take these concerns seriously before issuing any permit.

Sincerely,
[Your Name or Organization]